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Monday, 15 February 2016

Where does my heart lie

My Heart lies where 
the motorbikes roar. 

Where a pine forest watches
 motorbikes go through him all day.

Where the harakeke 
cheers on the riders.

Where the bark piles prepare
to die.

I LOVE this place.


I am learning to use personification in my poem.
I'm going well because I am asking for help.
My next step is to make it make sense.


  1. Hi Ty, I really like the opening line of your poem as it draws you in straight away with a powerful image. Nice job! Cheers, Loren

  2. Good job Tyler I like your rite gg